Sabor de Doces e Praia (tradução, original Seo Yunhu)

Escrito por Seo Yunhu (서윤후), publicado em 2016 na coletânea 어느 누구의 모든 동생 (Todos os irmãos mais novos de uma certa pessoa). Poema original disponível no link.

See also: English translation.

Sabor de Doces e Praia (사탕과 해변의 맛)

Seo Yunhu

Das coisas todas descartadas nessa praia, eu era a mais útil
Assumindo o lugar do que foi perdido por quem foi abandonado
Nesse mundo em que se coleta quem foi abandonado
Onde poderia ter sido a nossa capital?
Um palmo de parassois faz sombra e todos nós,
Como achados e perdidos que foram deixados pra trás,
Viramos atração para quem passa

*

São a sobremesa das ondas, os amantes sentados em roda, derretendo como um doce cujo sabor é o único que se conhece,
São lambidos pelas ondas oscilantes
O amor vai perdendo a forma, escorrendo pela ponta dos dedos dos pés, os amantes
Que diziam excessivamente que amavam, são ciumentos beligerantes, e só então o mundo parece se tornar um lugar doce e brando

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Eu gosto desse lugar que se chama praia

Detesto me banhar nas águas mas as palavras que secam ao sol se demoram, como os doces que se guarda pra depois, para comer mais tarde

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Dos doces todos que eu já provei na vida, você teve o pior gosto
A metáfora que descreve as coisas que são como você fica
Nos cristais entre o sal e o açúcar

*

Pegajoso por causa do que você disse,
Brincando com as feridas no céu da minha boca com a língua, eu senti o gosto do sangue e senti que era doce, uma doçura desconhecida, que se esvai de pouco em pouco

*

O mundo inundado pelo mar
E você não era nada mais
Do que um pé de pato

*

Tem uma praia na borda das minhas mangas
Nessa praia onde doces flutuam até que derretam completamente,
Encharcados por águas estabanadas, que molham o rosto e enxugam lágrimas,
Eu aprendo a nadar sem me secar

Com toda a minha força

The Taste of Candy and the Seashore (translation, original poem by Seo Yunhu)

Written by Seo Yunhu (서윤후), published in 2016, part of the collection 어느 누구의 모든 동생 (All the younger brothers of someone). Original poem available here..

Veja também: tradução em Português.

The Taste of Candy and the Seashore(사탕과 해변의 맛)

Seo Yunhu

Of all the castoffs dumped at the seashore, I was the most useful one
Filling in for what abandoned people have lost
In a world where abandoned people get picked up
Where would our capital city have been? 
Under the shade of a handspan of parasols, all of us
Left behind for good in the lost-and-found,
Become a piece for sightseeing.

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They are like dessert for the ocean waves, the lovers sitting in circles, melting like candy of the only flavour they know
The undulating waves lick them apart
Oh, love that melts away, from the tip of the toes, until it loses shape 
They said “I love you” too much, the lovers who are belligerently jealous, and the world seems sweet and mellow at last

    *

I like to call it “the seashore”
I hate getting drenched in the seawater but the words washed up on the shore are like the candy that one sets aside, to enjoy later 

    *

Of all the candy I have ever tasted, you were the worst one 

The metaphor for something akin to you in
The crystals between the sugar and the salt

    *

Made sticky by your words,
Playing with the wounds in my mouth, with my tongue I tasted the blood and I thought it tasted sweet, an unknown sweetness, slowly waning 

    *

A world inundated by the sea 
But you weren’t much
More than a swimfin

    *

At the edge of my sleeves, there is a shore
Where candy, drenched in clumsy face washes and wiped up tears,
Floats around until it melts away, where
I learn swimming that never dries up

With every ounce of strength I have 

song review: B.I, “해변 (illa illa)” WATERFALL (2021)

Originally published on Vol. 2, No. 2 of WWLT (What We are Listening To), KPK: Kpop Kollective.

See also the extended version of this review: Through the Crashing Waves, and what there is to be found there (Apr 2022)

25-year-old rapper B.I has often remarked on the importance of movies and poetry in his songwriting, as means of experiencing, feeling or articulating things he hasn’t experienced for himself, but that can result in vivid images and evoke strong feelings from listeners. The song “illa illa”, released on 1 June, 2021 as lead single of his first full-length album, is no exception to his style of painting strong images – the song’s Korean title 해변 [haebyeon] means “beach”; the English title, although a nonexistent word, bears close resemblance to the Korean ideophones that represent the undulating movement of waves. The whole track, along with its cinematic music video, make use of seaside metaphors to talk about finding yourself washed up on the shore after nearly being swallowed by the waves of an ocean which, in this story, is made of his own tears – “at the end of my sleeves there’s a beach/ because of the tears that I wiped from my cheeks.” This specific metaphor, which structures the song, was taken from the poem “The Taste Of Candy And Beach” [사탕과 해변의 맛] by poet Seo Yun-hoo.

Originally the leader of 7-member boy group iKON, which debuted under K-pop powerhouse YG Entertainment in 2015, he was credited for every release of the group up until his departure, in mid-2019, being awarded “Songwriter of the Year” in 2018 at the Melon Music Awards, one of South Korea’s major awards shows, after their megahit “Love Scenario”, crowned “Song of The Year” at two major award shows that same year. Much like “Love Scenario”, “illa illa” doesn’t come across as particularly happy nor sad on a first listen; the production favors a minimalist approach, but without ever losing depth, with enough room for the layering of sounds to boost the vocals to an echoed atmosphere that intensifies a catchy chorus that perfectly encapsulates the spirit of the song. However, unlike his movie-inspired songwriting, these lyrics feel very personal; when his album was released, B.I was still under public scrutiny due to allegations of illegal drug purchases, the reason for his withdrawal from his former group and agency. Though still awaiting final sentencing when the song came out, in the swirling of waves, as much as it is about the sinking, “illa illa” is about the emerging; like Kat Moon (2021) writes for TIME, “On the other side of the water is dry land, and in the song’s final verses the artist triumphantly sings of not shedding new tears. “Though I know it will crumble/ I’ll probably build a sandcastle again,” he declares. With the breadth and depth of emotions he conveys, B.I. shows he’s as much a storyteller as he is a songwriter.” The music and arrangement are also credited to Millennium, Sihwang, Kang Uk-jin and Diggy, who had previously worked with B.I in iKON, as well as other artists associated with YG Entertainment, such as AKMU, WINNER and Lee Hi.

Sources 

B.I. “해변 (illa illa).” YouTube. 1 Jun 2021. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5GaVA3ebKCo (14 Feb 2022)

iKON. “‘사랑을 했다(LOVE SCENARIO).” YouTube. 25 Jan 2018. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vecSVX1QYbQ (14 Feb 2022)

Moon, Kat. “The Best K-Pop Songs of 2021 So Far” TIME, 1 Jul. 2021, https://time.com/6077450/best-kpop-songs-2021/ Accessed 14 Feb. 2022.